Great job of capturing the action and positioning the pose! Overlappung of pelvis to ribcage is well done also, as is calf to thigh.
Diversify your range of marks by switching from using the tip of your stick to the side of you stick. Integrate of softer, brushier marks with the dark, sharp marks.
Diversify your range of marks by switching from using the tip of your stick to the side of you stick. Integrate of softer, brushier marks with the dark, sharp marks.