Two attempts to draw a line of action (30 s long)

by Ailinon, May 4th 2021 © 2021 Ailinon
Progress from the bottom to up, between them I watched a little more videos about it and was able to relax
Polyvios Animations
Great job on your quick sketch practices, Ailinon.

Well, if I was to suggest a critique, it would be that I'm not getting enough exaggeration in those lines of action. Why don't you please strengthen up those attitudes just a little bit more, by working with a much wider line width on a digital drawing brush on Procreate? (or something)

The reason why you would do this is as a result, your forms will become even more forceful.

Cheers.
Ailinon
Thank you! Sound challenging, I'll try!