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10-Second Loosest and Swiftest Scribble of a Cheetah
© 2022 Polyvios AnimationsDone as part of a practice session with poses of 10 seconds in length.
My current goal is: Develop my own signature drawing style (advanced)
This one is of a cheetah. In a scribble form ot get my gesture moving. What do you think? What can I do to cartoon it??
I'm having a little bit of difficulty seeing the actual form of the cheetah, which honestly might be because I'm not super familiar with scribble form. I think what might make it a bit clearer is if you added a few sharp lines to define the basic outline of each "chunk" of the cheetahs anatomy. For example, a line to seperate the bulk of the body from the limbs, a curve to show where the head might go, and a line or two showing where the front and hind legs might be. I think the addition of those harsher edges might also help the piece have more of that cartoon-ey style.
Take my critique with a grain of salt however, I will admit I'm not particularly experienced lol.