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Janhackstrom
The woman in the lower right corner is skillfully drawn. You have captured the moment beautifully. The woman in the lower left corner seems to have too long legs and fingers.
The reason is as a result is to make your lines and more linear gestures less weaker and more stronger, fluider, but livelier, yet vital furthermore energetic like a Ward Kimball Disney Animation. For more of what you know of what I mean, please check out some artwork by Ward Kimball online at Andreas Deja's blog here.
Good luck to you and have more fun with your learning curve.