Hi Neer. First of all, I think your english is perfect. :)
Secondly, your drawings are really good. Paying attention to the proportions of the figure is very important, and you've done a really good job in these drawings. I don't think they look messy at all and all of them convey the movement of the figure very well. If I can give you one piece of advice, it would be to EXAGGERATE. Usually when we copy the exact movement we see in a pose, a lot of the energy is not conveyed. So when we exaggerate the movement by darkening certain lines or drawing certain limbs bigger, we make it clear to the viewer what is happening in the pose, as well as creating a far more interesting drawing.
I hope this helps, keep doing what you're doing and you'll get far!
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