It looks like you master proportions just fine and general shapes of the body.
Maybe the next step for you is to learn some anatomy and to put more details in your work, or start shading things :)
Hey ! The pose on the drawing has another dynamic than the photo : The torso looks bent forward in the drawing and the shoulders are backward, wheareas it is the opposite on the photo. Personally, I find the pose on the drawing like "a genie with confidence" and I like it.
If you want to capture the pose on the photo perfectly, maybe try exagerating the line of the torso, bending it down to see the difference.
Hi Sandpit,
No critics from me, you master the poses and the proportions of the face just fine.
It is a good result for 10 minutes and 18-20min,
keep practicing and adding details maybe that is your next step ?
Thank you for sharing !
