This is pretty good! You have the gesture down pat, and the action is clearly conveyed. The proportions seem almost perfect as well. Pushing this further would include relaying that twist in the waist more, and maybe exaggerating the pose by showing more weight on the foot.
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This is pretty good! You have the gesture down pat, and the action is clearly conveyed. The proportions seem almost perfect as well. Pushing this further would include relaying that twist in the waist more, and maybe exaggerating the pose by showing more weight on the foot.