Figure 15

by Tx Williep, September 5th 2020 © 2020 Tx Williep
Georgina
I loved
Tx Williep
Thank you for your critique (Georgina - both). The more recent one is a correction of the first.
Tx Williep
See the above.
Pithtilmore
The forms that make up the figures body come off very well in this perspective view! I think you also captured the how the flesh wants to lay flat pretty well.

If you want to define more of the details that make up the body (looking at the knees), maybe consider doing some studies with cross-contour lines?
Tx Williep
Thank you for your critique. The model is older and is a very good model. She is laying on her back so gravity takes over. I tried to make the drawing not too complicated and still, the presence of the model come over to the viewer. Again, thank you.
Fbrigdon
This is very good! I like how you have used shading to bring dimension to the bottoms of the feet.
Tx Williep
Thank you for your critique. I liked the pose and I am glad you liked my work.
PCONTE
This is a dope piece! i love the way you worked in pen and also how you nailed the perspective.

Love it :)