first sketches

by Shadonis, December 31st 2023 © 2024 Shadonis
Aunt Herbert
Good start. You are working from the tutorial and focusing on the right steps.

The tutorial is a bit too minimalistic for most people's taste, so I usually point towards proko.com's Human Figure Fundamental course at this stage, which follows the same or extremely similar concepts as the LoA tutorial, but with a lot more details and explanations. Free version has all you need.
Smak
Honstly not bad for some first sketches.

My best advice to you is to keep going and try to practice everyday. With time you will get a better understanding of the funny little shapes that make up the human body, took me quite a while to be honest, but it's worth it.

Don't practice too much though, there is only so much one can learn in a day.

Also only compare yourself to yourself from yesterday or maybe a week ago.



(actual critique now):

Some of your proportions seem a bit off, like for example the legs on that drawing in the bottom left, Your overall approach is really good thoughm other then the one I just talked about, your sketches are pretty realistic :)

Have a great day
Polyvios Animations
Hello again.

Again, greatest job on your figure drawings and sketches, in terms of lines of action and rhythm. However, these have farthest too much chicken scratch to me. Would you like to please go ahead with drawing with largest and longest lines underhanded, using your non-dominant hand; Using 31 minutes of 30 second attitudes? (62 drawings)

Hence drawing underhanded from your non-dominant hand with 30 second poses, so that you can and will be more in sync from your most untapped right mode in the brain.🧠 For most information, look into this link HERE.

Good luck from me to you.