2nd session of figure drawing on a tablet

by Fist Of Spirit, August 18th 2019 © 2019 Fist Of Spirit
Done as part of a practice session with poses of 2 minutes 30 seconds in length. My current goal is: Reduce stiffness and make my drawings feel more dynamic, energetic, fluid
samorexic
Hi i sat down and got lost in what i was going to say but you will get a bunde of care from me. first of all you have promising poses- do not be discourage by my poor critique. hope u can see this image otherwise i can send you link[img]https://imgur.com/gMi04o6[/img]
Fist Of Spirit
I can't see the image, so I'll need the link. Thanks for your help!!
samorexic
https://imgur.com/gallery/gMi04o6 again im totally confusing you or i dont know maybe not ;D
samorexic
it dissapeared! here it is again :O https://imgur.com/gallery/wrEcyUC
Fist Of Spirit
I got it, thanks for the advice!! I did these in 2 and a half minutes so I did rush thru some of the anatomy to get the basic pose down, but i'll try to keep it in mind more. Also yes I'm really bad at exaggeration but I'm trying to get better ^^;;

Sorry I took forever to respond
samorexic
it is okay but remember speed is bad if you do not do it correct. speed is good if it is speed caused by knowledge. look at the nipples for example they are pointing different directions making a habit out of this is going to ruin your progres. you want to focus on something in every drawing if the goal is to learn proportions dont try and draw detail. if you want to focus on fluid exagerate and bend primitives. if you want to focus on anatomy dont focus on the entire body but select parts ect ect ect. in 2 minute and 30 second you cant draw a figure anatomicaly correct with all detail and make it beutiful. it looks like you are trying to capture everything here. pick what you want to focus on. and dont make excuses it makes you look like you are defending your mistake and that make people less likely to critiqe in the future. sorry for this wall of text i am just writing what come into my head. ^^