After sketching this is the final work

That's the most remarkable sketch you've done, FABREGAS33, that's very much the greatest composition I've ever seen. Keep up the great work! The best is yet to come!!

If I was to give you one little suggestion: I love how you've got going in terms of the forces, and in terms of the forms, why don't you please loosen up the forms completely?

The reason is because, it'll make your drawing and compositional sense seem all the more than organic.

Hope it's been totally effective.

Thank you, It ¡s not easy but your advice are very helpful :-)

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