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20210223 _5min
© 2021 AkikomaDone as part of a 30 minute class.
My current goal is: Improve at correctly capturing the overall proportions of the human form
Nice to meet you. I'm participating from Japan. I would be very happy if you could give me a critique. I'm not very good at English, so I'm using translation software to write this text.
I may not be able to write a good reply, but if you give me a critique, I would like to refer to it.
The sketches have a nice form but feel a little too stiff. You've managed to capture the proportions rather well but I do suggest trying more dynamic poses so you can gain an understanding of fluidity.