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The weight of this piece is very well distributed, and the pose is clear. Your line weight is also helpful in distinguishing where shadows are! One thing I would suggest is studying internal anatomy, especially joints. It may help make your future work look more cohesive.
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Delroy E
There may be some shapes in the chest area that you are missing however it looks great. Keep it up
Nice work on your nude pose, but can I please ask you a question? Did you draw that pose from observation, or did you draw that totally from imagination?
If either one, I'm not getting a lot of ranges of expression of each drawing style. Why don't you please free up your hands with 146 more minutes of 30 second poses, for a week (7 days)? (146 x 60/30/7, 8760/30/7, 292/7=roughly 42 a day)
The reason is because, if your current goal is to make your drawings, solidest, fluidest,and liveliest, that I allow you to go with it. You know? Good luck with your next drawn poses.
Hi, thanks for your comments. To answer your question, it was from observation and I focused on balance and rythms.