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by Cartoonistahn, February 10th 2022 © 2022 Cartoonistahn

Done as part of a practice session with poses of 10 minutes in length.

My current goal is: Better understand human anatomy, so I can render imagined poses

Miyu0e0

First of all, I feel like you did really well structural wise. I love how you broke down the body before adding the details. I feel like you should work on giving your drawings more life. One way I would suggest doing so is by exagerrating the pose a bit and really emphasizing the squash and stretch! Lastly, if you find yourself having some extra time, re-examine some parts of the body that you had trouble with (ex: hands) and break it down and redraw it. Overall, you're at a great standing point! :)

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Cartoonistahn

I appreciate your sincere advice.
Thanks to you, I clearly see what I need to do.
Have a nice day

Polyvios Animations

Good morning, Cartoonistahn, how are you doing today? Great work on your solid drawing of the poses, so far in terms of balance, depth, gesture, and weight and solidity. Way to go and keep up the greater work.

If you really and totally want my constructive criticism, is that your fluidity and flow in the lines of action are totally getting on the stronger right tracks. Would you kindly free up your whole arms with 4 hours, 45 minutes of 3 second poses, all flipped horizontally, and using our custom sessions on the figure drawing section? (14,400 + 2700=17,100/3=5,720 rough poses) Your fluidity will encompass your right side of your brain. Also, your fluidity and flow will become the most satirized for your comics and cartoons as you will ever want them to be, exactly. Good luck to you, and have the nicest morning.

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