The main thing I want you to notice is the boobs and how the body flows. Your image may have looked similar to the source image, but take your creative image and add it to that! Say to yourself,"HMMM I think this pose could use more of this!". Also try not to linger on the body itself and look at it more like bulding blocks. You are just a child trying to build a lil house, but which block should go where? What looks better? The more you let your creative outlet flow the better you'll understand how certain things connect. I mean heck look at your own body in the mirror and take some notes of how things go together. For instance how a womans hips are wider than a males or how woman have a gap between their thighs. Take notice of the hourglass shaped body and the slender parts. Everything adds up!
Im probably making no sense lol, but heres a lil video I like to watch from time to time whenever I stray from my path. Helps me remember that everything can be constructed lol.
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best of luck!! Keep this up and you'll be amazing in no time
Watch this real quick and take a few notes from it. Your gestures are great, but your proportions are a bit iffy. After watching this take another 5 days to practice and im sure you'll be even better. The more ya practice the better you'll be!
