The Thrilled Dance Partner

by Jcmlfineart, September 24th 2021 © 2021 Jcmlfineart

I am looking for better push points to exaggerate the story, so it is very prevalent that the man and the sloth are expressing opposing emotions.

But if you have any other edits, I am all reading eyeballs.

Thanks for the help.

All the best,

JCML Fine Art

Dons

Your creativity really blew my mind! But if you use colored pencils, it might be better to just deepen the color a little bit, right? I guess if you could draw the expression of the man and the sloth more clearly, especially the eyes, you might get the feeling you want(I am not a native speaker of English, so please forgive me if I express myself badly or upset you).

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Jcmlfineart

Dons,

Thanks for the idea. This will eventually end up as a study drawing for an eventual painting. But I think when it is larger the A4 paper size, I will be able to adjust the colour scheme a bit. I think I will take your advice.

Thanks for the offer of help.

All the best,

JCML Fine Art

Dons

Your creativity really blew my mind! But if you use colored pencils, it might be better to just deepen the color a little bit, right? I guess if you could draw the expression of the man and the sloth more clearly, especially the eyes, you might get the feeling you want(I am not a native speaker of English, so please forgive me if I express myself badly or upset you).

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