Dreaming of Sunburn

by Jcmlfineart, May 17th 2023 © 2023 Jcmlfineart

30 min colour exercise. Possible painting idea.

Suggestions ideas or critiques are much appreciated.

All the best,

JCML Fine Art

Polyvios Animations

Wow!! Greatest job on how expressively you've rendered your figures and colors and tones of them, but I'm not sure if I'm getting enough of your wildest, zaniest, and cartooniest exaggerations of your lines of action, rhythms, and tempos. How would you love to be great with 3 hours of 29 seconds of scribbliest drawings, using only our custom timer?

The reason why is because you can, shall, and mostly, will be able to feel your way thry the poses and lines of action, balance, rhythm, and tempo in anything. For most info on what I do mean by drawing with tempo, be sure to look at this video down there.

And so, Jcml, my hat's off to you, and hope they have all completely therefore totally helped and benefited.

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Jcmlfineart

Thank you. I intuitively knew this, but it was nice to have words to communicate and focus on when I am drawing.

Rythem is underrated for sure, and this was a good constructive video to explain what I had trouble with in this work.

All the best,

JCML Fine Art

Tropical Bird

Love your use of color! The gradient really shows great understanding of how the form's value is affected by the light.

The definition is kind of lost on the face though. It might be worth checking out the Asaro head. It's a great tool for understanding the planes of the face and it might help you light it more effectivly.

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Jcmlfineart

Tropical Bird,

This is a wonderful reference. Thank you for the information!

All the best,

JCML Fine Art

Naima

Nice color combination and interesting motiv with an interesting artistic pose.

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Galiciabaleria

I personally like this very much even though i think the way of the face and torso could be improved. This is beautifully put, the colours and position is gracefully done, a bit of cleaning to the work and a background that doesnt takes too much spotlight of the woman and you could even sell it!. Very creative

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