White Patio

Done as part of a 1 hour class. My current goal is: Draw my one-point perspective, in my backgrounds, scenes, and environments, with most and most instinct, and most and most feeling. Here's my newest scene and background of the palm tree-laced room in this post. What do you think? What can I do to make it most refined, or am I all set??

Big Chee June 17, 2020 10:17pm

Hey hey hey! Scenes are vital in art, so make sure to take your time with them. In this piece, it feels as though it was rushed. To me the colors feel thrown together and it is nearly impossible to recognize any shapes that would appear in the reference photo, almost as if at the last second you got frustrated and decided to scribble all over it? I'm not sure, but next time when doing backgrounds, if you do not have a lot of time, start by mapping out the placement of the objects and features in the scene so that there is clarity and cohesivity in your drawings, and fill in essential details that makes a scene recognizable.

Polyvios Animations June 18, 2020 1:19am

Thanks, Big Chee, but I'm working on my analysis and intuition on my background studies for my drawn animation exercises. I'm, not just trying to, but doing the best I can.

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Adupp 8 June 18, 2020 5:54pm

Can u explain the drawing

Polyvios Animations June 18, 2020 10:04pm

This drawing is just for practice, and thanks for your critique.

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P.S. It's meant to be a real patio/foyer, in terms of colors, temperatures, hues, and others.

Art Wolf 24 June 18, 2020 9:46pm

?? What even is this ??

Polyvios Animations June 18, 2020 10:05pm

This is totally supposed to be a white patio with green trees.

Art Wolf 24 June 18, 2020 10:29pm

Its extremely hard to make out anything, and I didn't even know what this was, no offense or anything, but if it wasn't for the title I would be clueless on what this is. I hope I wasn't too mean, have a great day and keep on practicing!

Polyvios Animations June 19, 2020 12:34am

I'm making greater progress, here.

Lemoreirax (unregistered visitor) June 21, 2020 8:48pm

I enjoy doing expressive lines like this. but maybe, next time, try doing it with grafitti pencil only, see what u can get just with the texture and monocromatic/gray scale overview

express our emotions by drawing is really a gift.

i have one doubt, these lines and colors are about your inner world or the outter world?

Polyvios Animations June 21, 2020 9:28pm

Just a little bit of both the inner and outer worlds, Lemoreirax.

And, where do I get a graffiti pencil? Traditionally or digitally??

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P.S. Greater job on your comment.

Wamafi June 27, 2020 12:53am

Maybe try looking at the thing you're drawing?

Polyvios Animations June 27, 2020 12:58am

Can do, Wamafi, if in a blind contour drawing.

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