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© 2021 AkikomaDone as part of a 30 minute class.
My current goal is: Improve at correctly capturing the overall proportions of the human form
Nice to meet you. I'm participating from Japan. I would be very happy if you could give me a critique. I'm not very good at English, so I'm using translation software to write this text.
I may not be able to write a good reply, but if you give me a critique, I would like to refer to it.
Good morning, akikoma, nice quick solid forces.
If I would, and could provide you with a totally honest and sincere request, it would be that: I totally love how organic your forces and forms are, but I just can't get enough of those. Why don't you please recline yourself in the hand(s), by going for 127 minutes of 24 second attitude sketches?? (127 x 60/24, 7620/24=about 318 poses)
And, the reason why you should go with that idea on polishing up your rawness of sincerity is as a result, you'll be able to sketch more honestly in your range of movement and expressions in the models, even from memory.
Good luck to you from me, and I hope you've found this completely and totally beneficlal and practical.