Nicer job on how expressive you've used your black watercolor, or india ink, and brush on how well you've used to paint out the lines of action of your figures fairly quickly but lively. I think your expressiveness is showing even more, but I feel that your one strokes will need to become even more stronger in your long but larger drawings. How would you like to please loosen up but lighten up your diluted lines of action and rhythm with 64 more minutes of 25 second figure poses? (3840/25≈154 quickly painted sketches of figures)
The reason why you could do this critique is because if your specific goal is to get rid of your stiffness more quickly than your normal way, then please go right ahead.
Nicer job on how expressive you've used your black watercolor, or india ink, and brush on how well you've used to paint out the lines of action of your figures fairly quickly but lively. I think your expressiveness is showing even more, but I feel that your one strokes will need to become even more stronger in your long but larger drawings. How would you like to please loosen up but lighten up your diluted lines of action and rhythm with 64 more minutes of 25 second figure poses? (3840/25≈154 quickly painted sketches of figures)
The reason why you could do this critique is because if your specific goal is to get rid of your stiffness more quickly than your normal way, then please go right ahead.
My hat's off to you, and good luck to you.