Meress的論壇貼

Hey! First of all, these look quite good! I think you did a great job at capturing shapes and smoothness, specially in femenine figures. However, I believe these lack a bit of volume and tend to look a bit stiff. I think you would need to focus a bit more on breaking the joints and pushing the poses a bit far-away. Also, try contrasting your rounded volumen with bit more straight lines, in order to achieve strength and force being made.

Keep it up!

Hi! Im new on giving feedback, but I´ll try to be as fair as possible. I feel that generally, you did capture the mood and intenteion of the poses, even depicting strength and direction quite succesfully. However, the drawings are really flattened, hard to tell which elements are at the front or at the back. For example, on the third piece, the knees are pushed back on your drawing. This is a pretty common mistake, as our brain tends to ordenate the elements at the same level, I struggle with this too. Also, pay special attention to proportions and blocking, cause some silhouettes are falling appart when compared with the source. For example, you pushed the hips of the female model up, making it flatter than the original. To improve at this, always keep track of the original silhouette and proportion positions!

Hope this helps you!