In fact, your practice seems to have heavily relied on rubbing lines. Before moving on to the next drawing step, you should try to erase the previous traces as much as possible. Failing to do so will make your work appear more cluttered. I suggest you try using lines boldly and not worry about drawing them incorrectly. Secondly, aside from the interweaving of human body structures, your character dynamics still require more practice because they appear a bit stiff, similar to Nezha in Chinese mythology, who was resurrected by the Buddha using lotus roots to make his body. I hope you can continue to work hard.
Because I am using a translator for comments, I hope it will not cause any misunderstandings.
Because I am using a translator for comments, I hope it will not cause any misunderstandings.