please some critiques

It looks like you are trying to improve proportions, but I think what you have here is pretty good. If anything, perhaps some of the legs in the earlier gestures are a bit short? But I’d have to see the reference image to be sure. It looks like some of your gesture lines are a bit scratchy, and perhaps lacking in confidence. This takes time, of course, but try not playing around with longer clean lines. You can then correct those lines with longer poses. Your more rendered images at the top look very nice! Maybe a good next step would be to focus on the shadow shapes made on the body. Good job!

Well, nsto, you're doing a great job on correctly capturing the proportions of the human form. What I'm seeing on the kneeling figure, why don't you do and/or try sketching it out in 10 minutes after your 30 min class.



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Well, nsto, you're doing a great job on correctly capturing the proportions of the human form. What I'm seeing on the kneeling figure, why don't you do and/or try sketching it out in 10 minutes after your 30 min class, please??

Thank you for posting.

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