Sulken Body in 50 Minutes
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Done as part of a 3 hour class.
My current goal is: Reduce stiffness and make my drawings feel more dynamic, energetic, and fluid
As you can plainly see here, I'm getting a lot of complete and totaly clarity of drawing in this pose. What do you really, totally think of this design. Any constructive criticism is welcome, no destructive ones necessary nor called for.
Yumimoon
your drawing definitely has a good fluid feeling to it, the colour also helps. i think the pose is clear. the middle of the body arround the belly however is kind of lost in the colours since its quite dark. having a clear separation of background and subject would really make this pop! perhaps a white posca pen around your subject might help. or some highlights on the character themselves
Casey
I love the contrasting colours and large overall shapes here, they help push the feeling of the pose. Varying line weight based on whether a part of the figure sits in front or behind - such as the arms in front of the legs, or the torso sitting behind, could help with the readability of the figure.
