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Gesture Class 450-X
© 2019 KiteDone as part of a 30min session divided in groups of 30s, 60s, 2x5min and 1x10min.
My goal is to better understand human anatomy.
Aahana X
I love the transition from simple figures to more constructive and detailed figures with added lining work. You could always try to make more confident line though.
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You have great gestural lines. There is a lot of movement in each of your images.
In the longer poses. More lines are not always better. I advise that you simplify.
You are right, I have realized that I tend to have more fixation with smaller details in the longer poses...at least more than I should. All of these were made with one line each, so it really shows when I focus too much on one part over the others.
Thank you for your feedback! I have slowed down a little today, but I feel like I have done more contour drawing... I will keep trying to simplify.![](https://puu.sh/Crlpi/064e7ca50f.jpg)