My biggest takeaways from the book years ago was the use of descending, offset rhytms and the skiing analogy he used. Also straights against curves.
I get why it frustrates people though, its a lot of abstract concepts & principles.
Hi!
How about numbering each image as they're cycling through? I often find myself counting how many I've drawn to make sure ive drawn the number of poses I intended to.
Also, I would also like to see some dancer types. How about skateboarders? Wrestlers?
Keep up the great work!
-Danny
Only thing I could say is that you lost the form of the ribcage in the second drawing. But nothing to add other than that.
