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September 2, 2021 5:46pm #27564
Nicest job on your very first post, JianPhoenix. Nicest job on your 1 hour class drawings of the figures so far.
So my suggestion is two critiques: 1) your lines are farther too itchy for your own good. 2) your gestures need even more looseness and freedom of emotion inside. Would you please loosen and speed up your dominant and non-dominant hands with your first ever 30 minute class mode (if you haven't already)?
The reason why you could and should do this suggestion or two is as a result, your lines and lines of balance will become the most weighty, lively and cartoony and exaggerated in your quick sketches.
For more inspiration, be sure to look up the Proko videos for free online on YouTube on gesture drawing. Good luck to you and your goals.
September 2, 2021 5:30pm #27563LadyClover, I must say that your cartoonier sketches have a very, very appealing, illustrative style that wouldn't look out of place in a Mary Blair illustration. I must absolutely admire your whimsical humor and vitality in your poses and attitudes and expressions.
My tiny suggestion to you is that though your lines are getting to be the loosest you could and should, but I'm not getting enough of the energy and the funniest drawing in the lines of action, and lines of rhythm. Would you please work more loose and faster with 5 minutes of 30 second poses, and 5 more minutes of faces and expressions?? (10 figure drawings and 10 expressions)
The reason why you could and would is because, your poses and facial expressions will become the most loosest, freest and expressive-est as you possibly can and will. For even more information, please check out some Lynne Naylor artwork online though Google or DuckDuckGo. https://duckduckgo.com/?q=lynne+naylor+the+modifyers&iax=images&ia=images&iai=https%3A%2F%2Fi.pinimg.com%2Foriginals%2Fa8%2Fbe%2F8c%2Fa8be8c3d03ff0b63f09eda0f8dbd1f22.jpg Enjoy downloading these images.
Hope these have been totally and positively helpful and inspirational.
August 29, 2021 6:58pm #27551Next time, try Imgur.
August 29, 2021 12:00pm #27549Keep trying, and never give up.
August 28, 2021 9:19pm #27545Nice job posting, but would you please fix up every and any link to your images here on that post, NORkaky? Because it'll do all of us good.
Hope this helped,
Polyvios Animatons
August 20, 2021 11:05pm #27524Well, J-dawg, that's absolutely spendid with what you're doing with those 30-second quick sketches in terms of speed and line efficiency. Great job!!
Well, well, if I could possibly provide a totally and absolutely sincere suggestion, then I must say that some of the contour flow is a bit too choppy in some other poses, in spite of the grace and ellegance in the overall communication. Would you kindly be able to draw the loosest and lightest touches with a 4B graphite pencil, with 30 minutes of 29 second quicker gesture drawings???? (1800 seconds/29 second=ruff-ly 62 figural doodles)
The generalization is, as a result, your lines of action will become all the most loosest, free-est, and dynamic and energetic and vital-er.
Good luck with your current goal.
August 19, 2021 5:17pm #27521Great job on your gesture drawings and quicker sketches, eteng. So far, so good. Greater range of motion and emotion, indeed.
I've got one current question: What are you currently working on today or tonight?
My criticism, I love how much action and speed you're going with, but I'm not seeing enough of that TLC (Tender Loving Care) in your quickest sketches of the poses. Would and could you kindly loosen and lighten up your lines with 30 minutes of 1 minute poses?? (30 of 'em!)
The reason is because, it can and will be able to help your stenghten up your lines of action, balance and rhythm.
Have the nicest time drawing.
August 15, 2021 11:37am #27508That's a very great question, Mika. I've got a swell littler idea for you.
Did you know that you can practice your gesture drawings of backgrounds sort of like you could with your characters? Here, check out this here link:Background References
The reason why I've put out this link is because, 1) I really haven't given studying those images yet at that point. And 2) They are extremely and definitely useful and beneficial for you and your goal. You don't have to only print them out, you can also bookmark those images, put them on reading lists, and then, download them all you can.
Hope these things are all helpful, informative and encouraging.
August 14, 2021 9:31pm #27505Well, natcas0, I do say that I really feel like you know where you're going with this, in terms of your figurative drawings. I love how much of a range of motion and movement in your attitudes.
Say, getting onto your case, I don't think that any of your poses are too stiffer, and I really feel like you're right about every pose being a bit too stiff. Because, that's the way we get started in your gesture drawing exercise. Would you please go right ahead with out interactive drawing tutorial here in Line of Action? The reason is as a result, by just starting out with the quickest line of action exercises at the very beginning, but soon ending with the longest and careful quick studies with as long as 5 minutes. Practice makes progress. Progress makes myelin. And now, here's the newest video for you to be inspired by.
Hope you've found this video and advice definitely and absolutely useful, helpful and informative.
August 7, 2021 5:49pm #27490I've already looked at your drawings from your last post, Pixelguru, for they're already magnificent and marvelous poses, indeed.
My issue or difficulty with these poses, is that though the shapes and forms are already all right, but the graphic shapes are not the quickest, slickest, smoothest and not the nicest appeal to them enough. Would you please be able to broaden your lines the most with 30 more minutes of 299 second quickest poses?? (about 6 attitudes in the nude/cloth) (all from a custom timer/session)
The reason is, as a result, your body drawings and sketches will be the least rigid and harshest, and the most loosest, lightest, longest, largest and liveliest in terms of the organic drawings, lines of action and lines of rhythm. For more info, be sure to look this up below.
Good luck to you and your goal, and I hope this helped.
August 6, 2021 6:33pm #27489Welp, Pixelguru, your drawings are some of the most marvelous figure anatomy drawings I've ever seen. Great job on your edges. Great job on your spaces and relationships (proportions and angles), and lights and shadows.
My smallest and insignifigant nitpick for your drawings for 10 minutes should and would be that your lines are really and actually not fluid and cleanest and quickest enough to me. Would you please do 1 hour of 5 minute poses of anatomy? (12 nudes and non-nudes) The reason is because, to help you caricature, distort, exaggerate and satirize the organic shapes, forms, and lines of action, and lines of rhythm. Good luck with you and your learning curve.
August 5, 2021 9:23am #27485That's impressive, Jan. Thank you.
August 4, 2021 6:10pm #27483Greatest job on our 30 second quicker sketches of the figures, slvsh. Very, very, very, very great job.
My biggest issue or criticism is that some of the lines of some of the poses are already appealing, but they seem a bit farthest too choppiest. Would you please do 2 hours of 29 second quickest sketches of figure drawings, with a custom timer???? (all flipped normal, horizontally and/or vertically) (7200/29=248 quick figures with your manga characters, with a 15 minute break inbetween)
The logical arguement is because, it can help you tap yourself into your right side of your brain, plus, to help you observe what you really see, but what you feel. If you're curious about the most quick sketching, be sure to look up the 2 Walt Stanchfield books on Kindle on Amazon.
Good luck, cheers and my hat's off you, and happy scribbling.
August 1, 2021 7:53am #27465Say! You must REALLY, totally know where you're going, Zviko. I think you're very functional in your step by step drawing. I really feel like that you're on the right track, and you may and might need a little more practice. I just completely and totally love your second and third steps on your 1 hour class' 25 minute pose.
My biggest criticism or issue is that some of the lines in the first ever step is a bit farther too timidest, shakiest and wiggliest in the graphic shapes and negative spaces. Would you please be the most boldest and ruthless and smoothest with a 29 minute and 59 second pose on custom timer for your figure drawing, in pure contour mode?? (1799 seconds) The reason is because, I feel that you'd be able to draw what you're really seeing, rather that what you think you're really, really seeing. More details, look up the Betty Edwards books on Kindle, Audible and physical books. Cheers to your goal and I hope these books help.
July 30, 2021 5:52pm #27454Marvelous work on your...what is it? A 1 hour class? dilandoubishop. Marvelous and very great job on your current work on the human figures. (especially your quick roughs from 30s-1 minute)
I feel that the ruffs are just not too quicker enough I see, for they are very too extraneous in lines, but otherwise, they're all very, very, very clearest and cleanest. Would you like to please be the most boldest and ruthless with your line economy and organic flow with 2 hours of 59 second quickest poses? (7200/59=122 quieckest ruff sketches) (ruff=rough, a Disney term, more info, look into Dick Williams' The Animator's Survival Kit, Expanded Edition) (custom timer)
As a result, your lines and organic shapes and forms will become the least stiffest and scratchiest, and the most fluid, cleanest, dynamic, spontaneous, liveliest and energetic. For more details, be sure to look into the Mike Matessi books on PDF and the Proko Gesture drawings for free on YOUtube.
Good luck to you and your goal.
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