The figure is very angular. It should have soft curves. You need to study the Line-of-Action (L-o-A) hand & feet section. I looked at your other drawings. I see some improvement. Go through the figures provided by L-o-A. Examine the figures to see how elements are put together & their relationships. When you feel comfortable start drawing figures that you find you can do. Practice and then practice more.
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