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Joshua Chronstedt
Nice shading on the bird! Good proportions. I think these could be even better if you use long, flowing, confident lines and accentuate the lines that are closest to the viewer. Hope it helps :)
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vallurietje
Thank you! Yes I need more confidence in my line-work. Will be practicing that. Good tip about accentuating the lines that are closer, I'm going to play with that. Thanks for the help!
Very nice, clear forms, and I love the way you use the brushes to indicate fur.
Thanks Aunt Herbert ^^