Gestures 26 10 22 (P.1)
© 2022 TonovzDone as part of a 30 minute class.
My current goal is: Reduce stiffness and make my drawings feel more dynamic, energetic, fluid
Jrearley (unregistered visitor)
I wish I could give your constructive critique but all I can do is admire your progress. I am a beginner myself and see how you have improved as you have gone along.
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Tonovz
Oww thank you so much for your words Jrearley!
The only way to become a master is to keep practicing don't give up!
kiwi
maybe you could emphasise some of the curves by making them in one line instead of a bunch of small lines that break up the continuity of the motion
These are very fluid! The forms feel soft and fleshly. I am going to make one more suggestion on your cross countour lines. Overall these look cleaner then your last set. But Especially on your women in the black underwear, pay attention to the edges. Think of them as ellipsis, most of the information of how they sit in space is in the sides of the ellipsis.
You nailed your right most figure, well done. I think they all can look like that.
Thank you Cave paint i will work on that for sure!