Dec/24/2018 - Standard

by Jman3, December 25th 2018 © 2018 Jman3
Done as part of a 30 minute class. My current goal is: Better understand human anatomy, so I can render imagined poses I started this one a little sluggish because I was a bit late on this one. I was worried going into it as my initial sketches seemed more unfinished than normal and I think making the skeleton a different color than the before through me off at first. I ended with a great drawing that I spent a little extra time on getting the shading done. Open critique, I think this is a good one of mine and I would like to see what is wrong with it.
Bugcher
Hello Jman3! I want to start off by saying that you're capturing the movement of the indivudual nicely. The only weak point I see in it is how fluid they are. I would suggest using less horizontal and vertical lines, and more curvy lines. Something I like to do is try to capture the individual in as few curvy lines as possible. It shows movement very well and keeps our poses from getting stiff. I also would like to say that your 10 minute sketch has nice shading and a good understanding of the human body. Please keep up the good work and never stop!
Jman3
Hello Bugcher!

Thank you for taking the time to look and comment! I will do my best to make the lines continuous instead of a combination of [size= 10.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: Verdana, sans-serif]intermittent [/size]lines in the future.

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