Dreaming of Sunburn

Wow!! Greatest job on how expressively you've rendered your figures and colors and tones of them, but I'm not sure if I'm getting enough of your wildest, zaniest, and cartooniest exaggerations of your lines of action, rhythms, and tempos. How would you love to be great with 3 hours of 29 seconds of scribbliest drawings, using only our custom timer?

The reason why is because you can, shall, and mostly, will be able to feel your way thry the poses and lines of action, balance, rhythm, and tempo in anything. For most info on what I do mean by drawing with tempo, be sure to look at this video down there.



https://youtu.be/fVY5gla0FNQ



And so, Jcml, my hat's off to you, and hope they have all completely therefore totally helped and benefited.

Love your use of color! The gradient really shows great understanding of how the form's value is affected by the light.

The definition is kind of lost on the face though. It might be worth checking out the Asaro head. It's a great tool for understanding the planes of the face and it might help you light it more effectivly.

Nice color combination and interesting motiv with an interesting artistic pose.

I personally like this very much even though i think the way of the face and torso could be improved. This is beautifully put, the colours and position is gracefully done, a bit of cleaning to the work and a background that doesnt takes too much spotlight of the woman and you could even sell it!. Very creative