Hi, Here is my advice :
Try to draw bigger for your 5-10 minutes drawings.
Instead of one little corner, take the whole page if you don't mind using too much paper.
Right now you are drowning your sketches with unnecessary drawing lines. I can see that you are trying to highlight the shadows by doing so, but because the drawings are so small, we quickly lose the shapes and details of your sketches.
Drawing bigger will force you - even unconsciously - to consider where you need to invest your time and energy with the time you have (and also give your pencil a bit of a break)
I think your last 15 min study shows that this might be right path for you : can you see how better you are doing when you allow yourself more space ?
Hope that helped. Good luck !
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Keizia
edited this post on August 18, 2023 1:33pm.
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Keizia
edited this post on August 18, 2023 1:39pm.
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Keizia
edited this post on August 18, 2023 1:40pm.