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Update: I got the 5 hour achievement and the 10 hour achievement at the same time, i think the 5 hour badge came a little late, don't know why, i just did an 1hr 30mins session, so i couldn't have collected both at once

hello, I'm new and I have been practicing on LoA a bit more and more, I was looking forward to receiving a 5-hour achievement, but I haven't gotten on yet.

I got a 2-hour achievement a few weeks ago and I have been practicing for a few days, it even says for this week I have practiced 3hr and 20 minutes, if my math adds up then that is at a minimum 5 hr 20m?

thanks!

I very much like the archer and the black and white portrait, ways to improve would be looking at the gesture of the poses as well as proportions of the face, since in the black and white portrait, the eyes do look a little bit big, and usually, there is a little shading to indicate different directions of the face (Shadows)

to get good at the proportions and a bit of gesture drawing since your poses look a little stiff, I recommend the Bridgman method: https://archive.org/details/GeorgeB.BridgmanConstructiveAnatomy/mode/2up

That being said these are amazing, keep up the good work!

https://imgur.com/a/sl8J8PY

Imgur Link if anyone has trouble accessing Picture

Hello, I am A University Student studying illustration, I would love some critique on how to make lines look clearer