USD Homewreck.

Done as part of a practice session with poses of 5 minutes in length. My current goal is: Draw my one-point perspective, in my backgrounds, scenes, and environments, with most, most, and most instinct, and most, most, and most feeling. Pardon me for the scribbly trainwreck, but I hear I'm getting a whole lot more than better. Whaddaya think???

Lily June 19, 2020 6:33pm

With your piece you try to convey feeling in your one point perspective but the scribbles get rid of someone knowing what perspective your trying to convey making it hard to feel emotion from your piece which most people wouldn't be able to understand even after explanation

Art Wolf 24 June 19, 2020 9:01pm

I do think that you're are doing better than before, but its VERY messy, I can see it a little and you're getting better but it still is extremely hard to make out, I can sorta see the trainwreck. All I have to say is your definitely improving from the times before! Keep on practicing and you'll be even greater than before! Have a good day!

SINE June 20, 2020 11:44am

yes it is messy but i do not know can take my eyes of your art peace so again is powerfull and full of life and that is most important thing in painting. So go on draw, paint and draw and paint some more:).

Shannonpearson June 22, 2020 6:36pm

Looking at some of your other pieces, I think this one is an improvement on some as far as showing a sense of form and distance. I think to some extent that is a result of allowing some areas to remain lighter or show space in between. Some areas look more muddy than I would prefer (esp. the bottom left with the yellow and purple) and I think allowing them to show more differentiation, or alternatively using less contrasting colors, would help them come across as more expressive to the viewer, but that might conflict with capturing expressively as well.

boop June 24, 2020 1:02pm

A phoenix rising from the ashes. I like it :)