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© 2021 AkikomaDone as part of a 30 minute class.
My current goal is: I don't know! I am an absolute beginner; I'm here to study the basics of rendering
Nice to meet you. I'm participating from Japan. I would be very happy if you could give me a critique. I'm not very good at English, so I'm using translation software to write this text.
I may not be able to write a good reply, but if you give me a critique, I would like to refer to it.
Hi there, akikoma,
Say, nice work on your 5 minute figurative poses. Very greatest! Again, if I was to provide you an honest comment, then it would be to say that I love the loose, gestural forces, but I should and could say that you would and could please work those a little bit more into your models. Why don't you please loosen yourself up with 113 more minutes of 30 second poses? (113 x 60 seconds/30, 6780/30=226 poses) The reason why you would go with this, is as a result, it could and would help out on making sure your movements are captured with the greatest of holisticness. Good luck from me, and I hope you've found this completely and totally instructional.
Polyvios Animations.
P.S. For more details on hands, look up Andrew Loomis' Fun With A Pencil.
Thank you!
I'll refer to it!