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"Tattoed Girl" Old portrait (2012) - Modèle venant de Rise Tattoo mag
© 2022 KheirThe last one before I stopped drawing for a while...
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Good
1. Love seeing your style through this piece-- very fun!
2. Good proportions
3. Thoughtful details
Possible improve,ents
1. Maybe re-evaluate the lips. The bottom lip being shaded and the top lip not being shaded creates a very specific look, which might be intentional which is totally valid. Just wanted you to be sure of the choice :)
2.I like the attention to some of the line weight(like at the bottom of the face/neck attachment) however, it might be helpful to include differing line weights on the upper section of the head/eyes/nose.
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hi Khier, its not tha bad. Just add some fluidity to the face next time when you put your pencil on the paper" I'm sure you know what i mean.Make it more alive!
btw cool tatoo and well done for the eyes.
Hi ! fluency ... that's a point I should work on for sure ! Thanks a lot for stopping by