25 min drawing.need your critique
© 2022 Shmeterlin
Done as part of a 1 hour and 30 minute class. My current goal is: Better understand human anatomy, so I can render imagined poses
Superfanmation
every thing looks great but the part of the head i can't tell if he/she bald or has long hair it even seems it has no head so a bit more definition will make it stand out but other than that everything looks perfect to me
Shmeterlin
Thank you for your comment, I agree head has to be more define.
Skysoda
the textures in this are absolutely gorgeous, My critism is the anatomy on the elbow seems a bit unnatural, specifically the lower segment of the arm near where the elbow is. The crease created takes a sharp turn into the fore arm, i belive this is what is causing it. the crease when arms are folded generally is curved but points to the center of the elbow/near there.
Sydney Grace
The texture and movement in this piece is great. I love the way you used white lines to add to the drawing. My only critiques are that the arms look a bit thin on the area by the shoulder and the form of the head and hair is kind of blurred. Other then that great work!
