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The line of movement in this piece could be more clear. The proportions look good, but the silhouette doesn't give a good idea of what the subject is doing and the pose feels stiff. Great work!

Good morning, KIMSUWON, and welcome aboard. I'm Polyvios Animations and how are you doing today? Great work on your proportions and angles, edges, and spaces, but the lines of action, balance, and rhythm could use the most loosest and liveliest amount of work by doing 5 minutes of 30 second poses, so that your poses will be executed the least stiffest but the most vitalest and energetic results the quickest. Good luck to you and your marches of progress and your first goal.

This looks good! You clearly communicate the pose with this sketch.

I feel that the use of the oval to draw the arm on the right makes it look elongated and that it makes it difficult to tell where the wrist starts and arm stops.

I like the overall proportions of the drawing though the drawing is really stiff. You did a great job keep going!

hello friend, along with the other feedback that the others gave you, i would suggest to spend some time once you're finish with the pose by comparing it to the reference. Use a red or any color pencil/ marker to to indicate that you captured proportions correctly by using it as a ruler, it'll help you know if you got the proportions for yourself. Also spend some time like Polyvios Animations said by doing 30sec poses to practice capturing the essence of the gesture, focus on the gestures rhythm mainly, don't be too hard on yourself and overtime you'll start to understand!