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I did this with the 30 minute setting I need some input please

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here's another one I did the same night


I would like some input on this one as well

thanks in advance

Stan

Hi Stan!

Your 30 minute studies look pretty good there. I'm missing some of the underlying basics that help capture the movement, which makes the second sketch look a bit stiff. I think a slight dramatization of the action line combined with more fluid lines (less short strokes) can give you a stronger basis to work from.

What goals are you currently working towards with your art?

I just want to increase the accuracy of my life drawing skills. I'm a photographer by trade. I use drawing as a means to help me find the shadow shapes in things and make compositions of them. I figure if I can make an interesting composition in a drawing I should be able to do the same with a photography.