August 3rd

by Brilicol, August 18th 2022 © 2022 Brilicol
10 minutes; 25 minutes. gel pen
Fern3553
The variation of line weight is really nice but your colors seems slightly muddled
Brilicol
Thank you for taking the time to critique! I can understand that, I kind of just pick colors randomly/ as I feel, so makes sense! If you have any tips or recommendations that you think would help with that I'd appreciate it!
Fern3553
Im new to this so im not sure how valid this is, but I think that what threw me off here was your use of grey? I think also a consistent use of a color(s) for shadowing and lighting might also make it more cohesive!

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