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Regarding the drawings, I think it's revealing to mention that you can make good use of negative spaces, but I feel that in some poses, I can't understand where the person's leg is or if it's a fabric, because you're a beginner, I feel like It is important that you take a look at the fundamentals of drawing, especially those of 3D shapes, lines, and construction drawings, this can help you a lot in your evolution, in addition, try to understand what did not look good in the drawings and correct them. them drawing on top, using the same photos you had using previously, don't worry about spending a long time correcting them, the most important thing is to understand where you are going wrong, so you can improve your weak points, besides, have fun with practice, challenge yourself to make gestures of animals, hands, feet, geometric shapes, this can help you a lot too, in addition to studying the fundamentals, and doing some drawings putting them to the test, I'm happy that you are practicing and asking for some feedback, they help a lot. Also don't forget to have fun in the process, putting on some instrumental music, not too loud.

Regarding the drawings here, I must say, you're doing an outstanding job on your very first ever tries in figure, I think. But, I feel that these gestures and actions are full of potential, but they could be not too stiffest but rigider yet. How would you like to kindly lighten up your lines of action and rhythm with 7 minutes of 28 second figure sketches? (420/28=15 pose drawings of figures)

42-28=14, 140

28, 56, 84, 112, 140

The reason is because your poses in the lighter lines will be drawn out less heavy but less dark, but more lighter, but more easier to erase for your more longer studes. For more info and details, please look into this video here on YouTube

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Good luck from us to you.