It's a drawing!

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  • July 5, 2013 6:06pm #75

    dxdragon

    The eye's are a little off...rushed it as a tutorial...about 8hrs

     

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    July 11, 2013 4:46am #920

    cel1na

    Cool! I love how the beard is rendered. Great job!
    You could always redo the eyes... the would really polish off the piece.

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    July 14, 2013 9:47pm #921

    Writero

    The trick is, what I feel is missing, is volume and structure. The rendering is there, but the volumes are not . Did you draw this from a photograph? The ears are a bit off, so does the mouth and the eyes (The quasimodo effect) I did a redline, and I found that the proportions are a bit on the wack side too.

    No probs though, just practise the planes of the head a bit and not to mention proportions, you are good to go :)

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