My First Attempt!

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  • #3851

    I had just done my first ever attempt at a LoA class :) Any and all critique is welcome! Started with animals since it's somewhat in my comfort zone.

    https://photos.app.goo.gl/RQkCt7tftaLvwVLt6

    Thanks in advance!

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    #3856

    Looks great! I can Identify all the animal here! keep it up!!

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    #3870

    These are so cute! You're already quite good at managing your time for the different time intervals. I find that LoA is most useful for practicing things that are outside my comfort zone, since the timed aspect keeps me going past when I would get discouraged on my own. It's also really good for building a regular drawing habit.

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    #3872

    this is super inspiring, thanks for sharing! im going to start my first soon too.

    #3877

    Good construction of the basic shapes and sense of perspective. From here I would try to emphasize a bit more the gesture at the beginning of the sketch. Great work though :D

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    #3879

    ToddMarkleArt,

    Nice Doodles and Sketches of your animals, but in order to be more than really fluid with your animals, why don't you try drawing one in 10 minutes, if you please?

    Have a great evening.

    PolysAnimations

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