This one <a href="http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/11/hannafigure.png/">http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/11/hannafigure.png/</a>
It's only a work in progress, but also fanart of this character (if that helps with making feedback) <a href="http://atelier.wikia.com/wiki/File:A13_Hanna.jpg">http://atelier.wikia.com/wiki/File:A13_Hanna.jpg</a>
I'd especially appreciate advice on fixing the parts that look very off, like the hair.
