09.10.18

The shading of both drawings was done phenomenally well. The proportions of the women are also very well done. However, the details of the face and the missing legs are the only things to improve on. Overall an amazing piece of art.

Your values are amazing! The anatomy is perfect as well. As for CC, I'd say practice on the gesture more. It looks great but stiff. Be more lose with your initial lines! Keep up the good work, friend! :)

Good morning, Vif424, and welcome back to Line of Action. I'm Polyvios, and how are you doing this morning?

Greatest jobs on your gestures, forms, and tones on your figure drawings that I've seen. I really love how well the tones obey the flow of the forces. But the anatomy still seems too shakiest yet awkwardest to me and my tastes. Would you like to loosen up but speed up your drawing process with our 30 minute drawing class of all our figures?

The reason why you would like to do this is because you can and will draw the most organically in your figure designs in life and cartoons, in the most unprecedented way.

For most details, please refer to the oldest Shamus Culhane PDF here, chiefly for the ideation exercise.

Let's hope it's gonna work out for your best.