glorified stick figure
© 2020 Bubble JrDone as part of a 30 minute class.
My current goal is: Improve at correctly capturing the overall proportions of the human form
Some left a critigue about slow down a really taking my time to to look. They also mentiond to start with a stick figute than work up to fourm . Is is all I could get done in the mount of time I had but I think th proportions are quite good.
Midasscheffers
The proportions of the torso and head are wel done. the head is at a good distance from the torso, not to far not to close. The arms have a good length. But the legs look a bit short to me. Overall solid proportions
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Polyvios Animations
That's very accomplished job on your work, Bubblejapan, that's very good!
But I've got one little critique: Here are the images.
I love how you got the forces and forms you've got with the relationship between the whole figure and the hands, but the hands are of different sizes. Why don't you please watch the consistency of the hand relationships (proportions and angles), in 50 minutes of 5 minute figure sketches? And why don't you please do 49 minutes of 30-second hand sketches??
The reason why is because of two factors: a) to help you sharpen your ability to visualize the forces and forms of the bodies and hands. b) to help you loosen up your hand to make your hands even more looser and most expressive. Hope they've been completely and totally productive and useful.