Rays of Memory
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Aunt Herbert
I love the over-the-top coloration.
Diana Coto
I love your vibrant colors and emotion :)
I do notice that his left eye proportion and position is off. It seems a little too small and not shaped at a roughly right angle form to show that it's a 3/4 view.
I do notice that his left eye proportion and position is off. It seems a little too small and not shaped at a roughly right angle form to show that it's a 3/4 view.
Jcmlfineart
M. Diana,
You are mostly right about the eye. But in this model, his eye's over the lid on that side is just that extra bit slooped, and smaller naturally.
Maybe I know too much. Sometimes knowing your models can change how you draw them, versus coming in cold to the season. I think that may have stumped me a bit.
Thanks for the critique.
All the best,
JCML Fine Art
You are mostly right about the eye. But in this model, his eye's over the lid on that side is just that extra bit slooped, and smaller naturally.
Maybe I know too much. Sometimes knowing your models can change how you draw them, versus coming in cold to the season. I think that may have stumped me a bit.
Thanks for the critique.
All the best,
JCML Fine Art
