Day 29, Better

I admire and adore how much of the lines of action, of balance and rhythm in your pelvises and ribcages, Starcursedmass. Greater job on all of them on this image.

My biggest problem I have with most of them is that though your lines are looser and light in those attitudes, but they are not enough of the comedy and cartoon-like feeling in them. Would you kindly practice of 60 minutes of 26 second anatomy poses of ribs and pelvises? (3600 seconds/26 seconds=138 scribble attitudes of some human anatomy)

The reason is because, if you really haven't done this suggestion already, even if they're gonna be a lot of vague scrawls, your hands will be able to be the most myelinated in your gesture sketches, in terms of your long lines, and of your larger lines.

Good luck to you, and my hat's off to you.

You may try thinking of the torso more as a Lima/navy bean shape to further aid a sense of continuity (rather than such "cylindrical" hips). And, Keep Drawing!