10 min
© 2022 Ace Rebel
Done as part of a 30 minute class.
My current goal is: Better understand human anatomy, so I can render imagined poses
Xylolfy
Maybe make the lines darker by pressing harder in the shadows? All the lines are mostly the same shade and by making certain spots darker and lighter you can really make the pose pop out more
Halshar
I believe that your drawing is amazing and that you only have a little left to be a 100% pro artist! My only critique for this piece would be to maybe define your lines a bit more, so you can differentiate between shading and actual linework. Also, if you are focusing more on the body's anatomy and- literally- the 'line of action', try keeping the face out of the drawing so that you can focuz on a specific skill/ area of study.
Hope this helped! :)
Hope this helped! :)
Dakota
Hello Ace! I would like to compliment you on how well you captured your subject. You did well on breaking the subject down into simpler shapes without loosing the original subject. On thing I would like to draw your attention too (hehehe pun) is the left leg. It seems to be a little long. If you where to draw that leg out straight next to the right one it would be longer. I would suggest cutting off some distance where the curve of the thigh mucsle ends and the knee. I hope I was able to help! keep up the good work!
Bella Matto